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Chapter 607 - Sword Labirynth of the Sacred Sword


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I have just read the only two available chapters of Sword Labirynth of the Sacred Sword and while I honestly would like to make a fully proper review for it, with just two chapters out I can't exactly do that without cutting corners, and so I have put this into Short Reviews.

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Here are my general impressions so far:

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The writing is good, the story is well-written, and characters have some depth to them.
Still, there are some typical mistakes authors most often make - the story is way too heavy in descriptions, and the general mood presented is also very much burdensome. While it's plenty unusual for Japanese novels to be like that, it's still a common cliche among the western writers.

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Aside from that, there are some things, which can be said to be pretty irritating, or rather typical for those kinds of novels.
The MC's parents are dead, society wrongly accused his family, and he's a poor, young sob that works hard and has nightmares.
Oh, and his teacher lied to him about seemingly the most important thing in his life, so that he wouldn't get himself into trouble, bummer.

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It's one of the most typical story set-ups one can think of.
No parents - no problems.
Working hard + a caring teacher = a well trained and well prepared for the future individual.
Broken heart and emotional trauma, coupled with sudden revelation about the great mystery of his life = incredibly determined individual dead-set on his target.

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Nevertheless, with the way it is written, it's not particularly a bad thing.
It does explain a lot of things well, and with how good the writing is, it doesn't particularly strike oneself as clicheous. 

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There is just one more thing that struck me as something of a general annoyance, something that's not really a cliche, but rather a certain often repeated nuance in all kinds of novels.

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That being the fact that the MC is pretty much the carbon copy of his parents and his teacher. He does not posses his individual hobbies, or anything of the sort, with everything, aside from his resolve, inherited from others.

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While it might turn out in the future that there is something like that in the end, it doesn't really sound very likely to be the case. 

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That said, there is not much more that can really be said about that novel for now.

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I will be waiting for more chapters to come, and might update this review once more after reading them, if time allows.

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